Rough Cut

Once completing my rough cut I was disapointed with it and felt their was many things that needed to be improved. After completing audience research this was confirmed with many people thinking my model didnt connect and my colour scheme wasn't right therefore these will be two things I will defentially change. I was also disapointed with my contents page and the layout therefor I am going to work on this straight away as I feel it looks very unprofessional and unfinished.