Rough cut feedback from target audience

Things target audience currently like:

• Colour Scheme
• Front Cover is busy
• Magazine Title 
• Layout
• Good images 

Things target audience felt needed improving:

• Model doesnt fit genre
• Yellow colour- possiably use white instead
• Model doesnt engage with audience
• Wider use of fonts
• Tilt the picture of Florence and the Machine
• Barcode too long+ too many numbers
• Colour of Writing at bottom of page hard to read.

                                                       Things target audince liked on my contents page:

•  Busy contents page- lots to talk about
• Good stories on contents page
• Layout
• Range of photos
• Variety of photos  
• Range of models
• Good photos
• Main model wearing same colours as text

Things target audience felt needed improving on contents page:

• Captions on photos
• Page numbers
• Change the background colour from white
• More interesting fonts
• Typing error

                                                                           Things target audience liked on my Double page spread

• Layout of Article
• Good Article
• Font sizes- break up the text

Things target audince felt needed improving on my double page spread

• Range of fonts
• Range of colours- seems very plain
• More interesting fonts
• Model doesnt engage with audince
• Page numbers            
•  More drop Capitals